looks pretty cool...... BUT NOT AS COOL AS.... uhh..... Volume 1....MINUS the swearing in it. I'm pretty used to seeing swears on the internet so big deal. My parents allow it since i know it's wrong, and I don't swear at all. Not even a bit.
Congrats on avoiding profanity- it's commendable to articulate your thoughts without resorting to obscenities. I'm glad your parents let you read work with swearing in it though- because some characters out there are certainly less discerning with their choices, and I find it makes for more fun fiction when a variety of personalities are thrown together.
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