V3 page- Starfall Morning

The details, the design and the colors of the image are really incredible. One would think you spend at least a whole month on each page.
However, maybe a bigger text would be better, as the words don't "jump" to the reader and he has to focus on the reading a little too much, instead of being able to look at the whole piece.
Also, it may be a good idea to point out more the personality of the characters. The only one who's evident is Namah. Even Lilith, because of her power, is kinda hard to understand: a sweet girl but with the power to dry living being of their life force.
Mace is the only main character with power still unknown, but I understood that we may see it later in the story.